As an author, how can I improve my writing?
- Vyvyan Evans
- Sep 12
- 3 min read
Before submission to a literary agent, or self-publishing, an expert writing specialist can help an author craft the best version of their novel!
The old adage goes that everyone has a novel in them. While many aspire to see their stories in print, the reality is that standing out requires more than just an idea—it demands a manuscript that truly shines. Today, more people than ever are trying their luck with literary agents. The competition is fierce. Part of the problem is the sheer volume of submissions agents receive—often hundreds each week, and sometimes even every day. Because of this, it’s absolutely essential to submit a manuscript that is not only complete but also polished to the highest standard. Only then does it have a chance to capture an agent’s attention.
Some authors choose to go the self-publishing route—either after giving up on trying to catch an agent’s eye or because they are set on being in control of their own publishing destiny from the outset. Today, it’s entirely possible to self-publish high-quality books that can compete with those released by traditional publishers. However, for an author’s book to receive the attention it deserves, the story must be strong and polished. It should be compelling, with characters who create genuine emotional resonance for the reader.
In both instances, authors are increasingly seeking the guidance of writing coaches, beta readers, or developmental editors. But what distinguishes these roles?
A writing coach mentors authors by guiding them in literary techniques, character development, and story arcs. They offer personalised support to help writers improve their skills.
A developmental editor, also referred to as a structural editor, collaborates with an author on a specific novel. The role involves assisting the author during the writing or drafting process to complete the manuscript. Usually, a developmental editor reviews the draft manuscript and provides suggestions regarding plot structure, character development, and the introduction of key information. A developmental editor may also provide specific suggestions for rewrites of particular sections of the novel.
A beta reader gives a general overview of an author’s work, sharing whether they liked it, found it satisfying, or noticed areas where their interest dropped or elements that seemed less effective. This feedback is less detailed and more subjective than other assessments, reflecting the reader’s personal impressions rather than an objective evaluation.
In over twenty-five years, working as a university professor of linguistics in both the USA and the UK, I have given hundreds of classes on all aspects of language, communication and writing. And during this period, I have worked with many authors, publishing professionals, and also published sixteen books of non-fiction and fiction alike—gaining two prestigious Kirkus starred reviews for two of my novels.
In my experience working with writers across genres, authors benefit most from integrated feedback that blends craft, structure, and personal reader response, rather than the more compartmentalized feedback, offered by the three types of role mentioned above. Effective feedback addresses technique, development, and emotional impact—mirroring how actual readers engage with a novel.
My work as an expert writing specialist encompasses all three roles. I provide a detailed and integrated report for authors that takes a joined-up approach, providing a detailed overview, focusing on craft, story arc, pacing, character development, structure and reader engagement and emotional impact. I work with authors on everything from style, tone, voice, and even in germinating and fleshing out original ideas and unique conceits.
Samples of the kind reports I provide can be found here:
I offer a range of reader reports to authors on the Fiverr platform (@vyvyan_evans)—feel free to check out my services, either those advertised or on a bespoke/custom basis. And am always happy to work with authors, new and old alike. I am passionate about good writing and excellent storytelling and have the breadth of knowledge and experience to help others too.
